Thursday, January 2, 2014

Flash in the Hubble

Another portal gone
Unnoticed,
Rid of,
Relief from the dejected
Antediluvian
Time-dilation,
Alternate life
Staring across
Another universe
Beguiled
By the sparkling,
Red-hot
Nano-second
Begetting
Neoteric
Dimensional promises




Based on We Write Poems Prompt #194, Happy New Year



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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 2, 2014 at 6:17 PM

    Love it Denise, for some reason it had me smiling from the start and only got better,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/

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  2. Denise Janikowski-KrewalJanuary 2, 2014 at 7:19 PM

    Thanks, Elizabeth, for leading me to think outside this realm! ;)

    -Denise

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  3. annell4January 3, 2014 at 7:50 AM

    And Happy New Year to you!

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2014 at 9:48 AM

    This is very good indeed!

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  5. vivinfranceJanuary 4, 2014 at 3:02 AM

    A brilliant interpretation of the prompt!

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2014 at 6:05 PM

    Intriguing poem about alternative universe, Denise. A worthy subject indeed.

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  7. Raven's Wing PoetryJanuary 7, 2014 at 5:03 PM

    Fascinating. I can't help but think of us and those in the other dimension looking across at (or past each other) through....what? A portal? A curtain? A mirror? Lord only knows. But I like the way you string these words together.

    -Nicole

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