Monday, July 8, 2013

Fresh!



Blue liquid enabling
Frothy foam mustaches
To repetitively kiss and shush
Malleable sand,
Unyielding rocks





Based on Prompt #164 at We Write Poems
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4 comments:

  1. JulesJuly 15, 2013 at 5:55 PM

    My first thought was one of those blue shushies...
    but then could be the shores of Maui or even the Big Ilsand when volcanic liquid hisses into the sea making...new rocks.

    ~Jules (gemsstonepages @ WP)

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  2. Denise Janikowski-KrewalJuly 16, 2013 at 9:14 AM

    Jules, I like all of those thoughts on a hot summer day. Thanks for visiting!

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  3. Raven's Wing PoetryJuly 16, 2013 at 10:21 AM

    I like how you painted the sea and its waves into this surreal and gorgeous image.

    -Nicole

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  4. Denise Janikowski-KrewalJuly 17, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    Thank you, Nicole, for your kind words!

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